Wiki Comments

Mike Hopkins (Buffalo-Wiki) – Urban Gardens

You chose a beautiful and important topic for your article. People really need to know the alternative uses of available property for collective benefits. You also did effective research and presented some hard facts and useful data. I have a few corrections for you though. I believe your information will be better presented with fully inclusive subtopics (like “the advantages of urban gardens” or “the aspirations of Curtis Urban Farm Foundation”) or rather take time to introduce your subtopics before delving into them. Also, in line one, 1/6^th should be something like “a sixth of” or maybe "one of every six Americans."






Sable Hill (Wiki-How) - How to Survive Your Freshmen Year in College
I like the way the ideas were outlined. They generally looked very straightforward and easy to follow, but they were also funny enough to get my cheekbones hurting after going through. It seemed mainly influenced by your own personal experiences and these rules may not all generally apply. There are grey areas and so in the real world there might be a need to be more explicit on some of these ideas. Nevertheless, it’s a very useful subject to highlight. By the way, you may want to correct "your dorming" (at #4 – Dorm Living).






Kevin Freiheit - (Wikipedia)  Dash's Market (Buffalo, NY)

I have a few clues as to keeping your article from being continuously deleted. First of all, much of the information you provided about Dash has somewhat being provided by other articles on Wikipedia. As such, editors may immediately be tempted to move yours to a subtopic position under some other article.  Secondly, considering your subjective and continuously changing point of reference, most readers may consider your article as promotional rather than informational. 




Matt Zahm - (Wiki-How) How to replace the front pads...

You said in #2 to kick the wheel if stuck. How about shaking it…lol?

You intricately covered this subject in detail with very illustrative pictures and drawings to support. The video you included was also very helpful. As a matter of fact, after going through the blog, I believed I could perform the repair procedure all by myself. Since I don’t have a Nissan Xterra, I searched without success for any similar article on my vehicle model and year. Don't you want to write another article on Toyota Prius?

Sharif Kassim - (Wiki-How) How to Create an Instrument Sequence on a Mpc

I am a novice in this regard and so I have a few questions.

First of all, reading through your steps and going by the pictures on the page, I’m confused. Does the MPC 1000 record external sounds, internal ones or both? You also used some technical terms that may keep a novice from benefiting extensively, but I believe the page will be very beneficial to the right audience.